Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
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Originally Posted by mikedudley17
if you need an editor, I can help. I am curently editing my friends script for a movie he has written. It take me a while but only because I am very thorough. Dont worry, I wouldnt share your writing with anyone.
If you want to read ome of my own writings, they are on my facebook. heres an example:
Butterfinger Chronicles
Butterfinger Chronicles
May 9, 2010
08:00
Day 1
This is it. I have one Butterfinger bar left and I will consume it slowly and deliberately. I know this is the end and I should have prepared myself better for what looks like a grueling journey ahead of me. I’m nervous, apprehensive. Only 30 minutes until it’s all over and all I can think of is all the torture that lies ahead of me on this sugar free journey. I’m opening the Butterfinger now. I am listening ever so hard to the sound of the wrapper tearing and coming unglued. I’m biting into it now, the slow descent of my teeth through the chocolate and layers of buttery-flakey-toffee-ness is so rewarding. Yeah, it gets its own word, toffee-ness. The chocolate is melting to my teeth and gums; it’s so sweet and delicious. The toffee and chocolate are coming together and dissolving in a whirlwind of molars, premolars and saliva. I’m almost done chewing it but I don’t want to swallow it, not yet. One more chew just to be thorough. My favorite part of biting into a Butterfinger is when the bits of toffee under the chocolate flake off and slowly disintegrate in between your teeth. Ok, it’s swallowed. Here is my last bite.
OH MY GOSH! I found heaven, it’s in my mouth! This must be what it’s like to wake up as Jesus everyday!
Well here I go. Goodbye sugar, I will miss you. I’ll send you letters from the front; don’t write back, it will hurt too much and if this is my last letter, then know I went down thinking of you!
Always and Forever yours,
Me.
Must...... Eat.... Butterfingers.....o.o
I love Butterfingers.
Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
should have sent you my english papers :(
Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
So... that "something that happens" is that she gets to the lot and the "Aveo picks her"? Like the Bumble bee picked the kid in the transformers movie? and herbie picked lohan in the junk yard?
Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
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Originally Posted by serega12
So... that "something that happens" is that she gets to the lot and the "Aveo picks her"? Like the Bumble bee picked the kid in the transformers movie? and herbie picked lohan in the junk yard?
no. The only thing I'll reveal is the main car character is a W-body 1995-2001 Chevrolet Lumina.
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Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
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Originally Posted by Z34guy
no. The only thing I'll reveal is the main car character is a W-body 1995-2001 Chevrolet Lumina.]
well that kills it for me :P
Honestly, i would write it, whether it has its place where you hope it will, or somewhere you didnt think to look, if it is well written and reads good, i'm sure it will be successful..
Re: Novel Idea (non-creative thinkers need not read, unless you really want to)
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Originally Posted by petrified.rabbit
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Originally Posted by Z34guy
no. The only thing I'll reveal is the main car character is a W-body 1995-2001 Chevrolet Lumina.]
well that kills it for me :P
Honestly, i would write it, whether it has its place where you hope it will, or somewhere you didnt think to look, if it is well written and reads good, i'm sure it will be successful..
The main car character's car spirit is a boobalicious, chubby blonde girl though! :wink: See? I know how to make things work.
